Add water to DROWN
Fingerspell E-L-Y-S-I-U-M to retain the important information of that time
Affect/Genre/Register (they just were shipwrecked and Viola is confused about where she is, etc. etc.)
NEAR = "not 3 hours" (conversational sign)
Include RULER and HONOR to show how people perceive the Duke
DAMAGED = chewing? (maybe closer to the body and more dramatic/flowery = )
GO-AHEAD? Maybe LEAD-ME
Great backchanneling!
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