Test Result 1:
- Needs more affect (nonmanuals and characterization)
- Needs more feedback/back channeling (responding, reacting)
- ASL Syntax: not bad, but some things need emphasis
- Need to be in character (blank expressions)
Test Result 2:
The beginning and end that didn't quite get edited were distracting to me. Other than that the signing was clear and understandable, and I thought that the affect matched the source well. I don't have too much feedback for this one; I dont see anything that needs to be changed.
Test Result 3: click here